Thursday, 4 February 2010

More stories from Class 3/2

Here are some of our latest stories. We have been learning more about adjectives (describing words) and great ways to start sentences using words like suddenly, luckily and unfortunately. What are your favourite adjectives in these stories?

The Best Party

by Fahsai

Once upon a time there was a fabulous boy called Lee. He lived with his mother near a strong and mighty mountain with lots of snow all over it. One Monday morning his mother said: "Take this sandwich box to your friend's halloween party."

So he rode his bike on the snowy road to a big mountain. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a dragon appeared with breath like fire. He looked scary and said,"What have you got in that box?" "Just a sandwich for my friend's holloween party," said Lee. "Can I come with you," asked the dragon. "Yes, you can," said Lee, with a smile on his face.

So Lee rode on a bike and the dragon went with him. They stopped at a little cave and there were two, scary gorillas."What have you got in that box?" said a gorilla. "Just a sandwich for my friend's holloween party," said Lee."Can I come with you,"asked the gorilla. "Yes," said Lee.

So all of them walked because the bike was very bad to ride and everyone went to Lee's friend's house and they all had fun.

All Because of a Bag of Books

by Unna

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Daisy who lived in a big, brown, wooden
boat. One day her friend came to her house and said,"Tomorrow, bring the books to me at the
oak tree."

In the morning Daisy woke up and quickly got her books. Then daisy walked and walked until she came to a huge, dark cave. Suddenly, an owl appeared with wings as big as a
giant's finger. "What have you got in that bag?" asked the owl. "Just paper," said Daisy.

Daisy ran as fast as she could to a scary, black village. Suddenly, two scary old grandmother's appeared."What have you got in that bag?" asked the two grandmothers. "Just paper," said Daisy.

Daisy ran as fast as she could to a small, brown oak tree."What have you got in that bag?"
asked her friend. "Lots of very good books," said Daisy. "Great," said her friend,"Let's
make a fire and read the books together."

A Little Girl called Mind

by Pim

A long time ago there was a little girl called Mind. She was a brave little girl and one
morning Mind wanted to play a game with her grandfather. She put the game in her bag and
went to the home of grandfather.

Suddenly, she went to a big, green tree and she saw a little bear who was very cute in the
forest. The bear said "What is in your bag?" Mind said: "Oh, it's some books."

Then she went to a small pond and she saw a small house with a cute lion. She walked and
walked and in the forest she saw her grandfather. Grandfather asked "What is it in your bag
Mind?" Mind said,"It is a game." "Oh good," said Grandfather.

Luckily, Mind played the game with her grandfather. Unfortunately, mum said, "You are late
for school." Mind woke up and went to school.

The Little Girl

by Dada

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Gona. She lived in a tall, wide cave with
her sister. One day Gona wanted to take a game to play with her friend.

So she walked and walked until she came to the little house and she saw the brown lion with
teeth as sharp as a knife. Gona was very scared of the lion and she ran away as fast as she
could to a big, green tree. And she sleep under the big, green tree.

Then she woke up and she saw a scary tiger. It was very hungry and it wanted to eat Gona but
Gona didn't want to die because she loved her sister very much. She ran away as fast as she
could.

Suddenly, the tiger followed Gona then the tiger saw her friend by the tree and it was very
scared and it ran away. Gona saw her friend and her friend asked, "What is that?" "It is a
game to play with you," said Gona. "Thank you," her friend said and they went to play the
game in her friend's house.

The Smelly Skunk

by Jet

Once upon a time there was a smelly skunk called Bobby who lived in a large, green
forest. One day he wanted to play with his friend, the white Pegasus.

He walked and he walked until he saw a huge, powerful river. Suddenly, the scary shark
appeared and said,"Where are you going?" "I go swimming," said the smelly skunk and he ran
as fast as he could into the green forest.

The smelly skunk walked and walked until he found a cave. Suddenly, not one, not two but
three blue dragons appeared and said, "Where are you going?" "I go swimming," said the smelly
skunk and he ran as fast as he could into the green forest.

Unfortunately, the dragons followed the smelly skunk. Luckily, the dragons disappeared and the smelly skunk went to play with white Pegasus.

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